Sunday, 27 January 2008

Reading the remnants

The ash from the incense
did not
bre
ak
off in piec
es
but droo...oop..
..ed
in one long strand onto the table
like a spent whip

3 comments:

norah said...

hey sophia, i like this!!
do you write poetry very often?
more please!

Greg said...

Did you write this, Bren? Gads -- it's good. You've deepened since I knew ye.

your new best friend said...

or a spent wiener!
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