Sunday 27 January 2008

Reading the remnants

The ash from the incense
did not
bre
ak
off in piec
es
but droo...oop..
..ed
in one long strand onto the table
like a spent whip

3 comments:

norah said...

hey sophia, i like this!!
do you write poetry very often?
more please!

Anonymous said...

Did you write this, Bren? Gads -- it's good. You've deepened since I knew ye.

Anonymous said...

or a spent wiener!
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